Masterclass - Part 2
The Other 9 Mistakes Killing Your Response Rates
Logos that steal eye-flow, AI art that triggers ad defenses, QR codes nobody scans, CTAs that get skipped, and five more layout problems you can fix today.
Didn't see Part 1? Watch it here.
Now You Know the 13 Mistakes. What's Next?
You've seen the 13 layout problems that silently kill response rates. Most copywriters and marketers have at least 3-5 of these in their current pieces.
The question is: which ones are in YOUR piece?
Some are obvious once you know what to look for. Others are invisible without a trained eye. That's where the Eye-Flow Audit comes in.
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Send me your piece - postcard, magalog, sales letter, landing page, insert. I'll record a personal Loom video showing exactly where readers drop off and what to fix first.
What you get:
- Personal Loom video - I walk through your piece on screen, annotating every issue
- Eye-flow map - where readers actually look vs. where you want them to look
- Priority fixes - the 3 highest-impact changes, ranked by effort vs. response lift
- No pitch - the audit is the audit. Use it yourself or hire us, your call
Reply within 48 hours. I personally review every submission.
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